Monday, December 1, 2014

Volcano 15 words or less Poem Tuesday

Write a poem with 15 words or less about the picture below.
Click on the COMMENTS. Click on anonymous. Type your poem and leave your first name and last initial. 

39 comments:

  1. lava lava it is so hot
    when it reaches
    the surface
    it is not.
    sam.D

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  2. lava,lava,
    it is hot,
    it is red,
    it comes out of a volcano.
    Lucie B.

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  3. sparks are flying
    in the air
    it's so hot
    like a circus fair
    ashley E.

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  4. About volcano Volcanoes are like sun
    and fire.After volcano finisht the tsunami will start.
    When we are near the volcano thats daingaurous.
    By:Ekanthika M

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  5. lava is hot
    wen it is at the top
    it is not hot it is cold
    by lucas

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  6. hot hot it burns alot when it blows its top then it go's everywere and blow's stuff up
    Pablo M.

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  7. vlocano are lava stoeresr montles bascle

    andrew.j

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  8. volcanos are mean.
    bugs are greeen.


    volcanos are evil.
    some bugs are beetles.


    Leyla y.

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  9. lava is so hot be care fol you can get
    barned and be hurt
    by devin

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  10. lava, lava, burning hot
    explodes because of
    magma it comes
    out of a volcano.

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  11. the lava is hot wen it is awt the rock,s are meltid
    daniel.o

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  12. The volcano is going
    Boom boom boom

    I'm going
    Doom doom doom

    Brianna K.

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  13. sometimes volcanoes are underwater.
    it shoots
    out the same way.they are cool.
    Taylor.S

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  14. lava lava hot hot hot if you touch it will kill you.

    QuintA

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  15. volcano explode, lava smoke cant git any where ,
    well if you dare
    avery

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  16. volcano volcano you explode so big volcano volcano you scared a little kid
    mya.O

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  17. volcanos, volcanos ,they all erupt
    some under watter they turn into islands
    they all heve magma inside of them.

    Lucie B.

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  18. lava,lava,lava
    you can be hot'
    but you can
    be red to.
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    lava,lava,lava
    you can be hot
    and you can be red to
    and you are yellow
    Deven.C

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  19. volcanoes
    volcanoes volcanoes all a round spriding
    davian

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  20. look there are bubbles coming from under watter!
    look now there is watter shooting out of the watter!
    I know what that is it is a volcano!
    Lucie B.

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  21. Volcano volcano
    when you erupt
    oh no lova will shot out of the top run!
    Demetrius K

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  22. lava,lava red and hot
    it's not like you have a lot.
    joep h

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  23. i am an volcanoe
    if im mad
    i erupt
    boom
    wesley stallings

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    1. I love how this is structured: 4 words, 3 words, 2 words, 1 word. I also love the theme and the powerful, one word ending. Nicely done, Wesley.

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  24. Run run
    if you don't
    you will have a big surprise
    Sofia

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  25. Lava spills,magma. inside. Don't go near it will hurt you
    It's volcano!
    gibson m

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  26. The volcano's erupting I'm
    screaming I'm going to die

    Luke B

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  27. Lava Lava
    it is hot
    lava lava it is red

    beter not tuch or you'll
    burn!
    Angie C.

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  28. lava lava you are scary! mia.i

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  29. volcanoes are hot! hot! hot! and thay will blow there top it will rain ashes on top you hop
    hop hop on hot! hot! hot! rocks that have hot! hot! hot! steam pumping up.
    matthew

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    1. Hi Matthew - This was very descriptive and I felt like I was there.
      Well done.
      Cherry W.

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  30. the lava is coming run every body
    the lava is coming Isabella rodrigues

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  31. a volcano it can esplod any secnend wach out.
    evan pendlton

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  32. im standing on the ground
    people screaming all around
    i get down low
    but i know the lava is a foe.
    spencer,d

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  33. lava stiming hot its coming daun the hil run every body run
    fernanda fuentes

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  34. I enjoyed reading each and every one of these. They all did great work!!
    Cherry W.

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